Margaret Louise

At night she kept her bedside lamp on until three or four o’clock in the morning, a book on her knees. Sometimes her pillows stood upright forming a throne around ...

I loved this. The gothic imagery and the "forbidden romance" aspect of it. Some things confused me, though. Is this angel a good or evil being? It would seem he ...

GREAT! Great, great job. The brilliant simplicity of it, the imagery, the abrupt ending. Loved it! I loved that the man had to scramble for his few coins just to ...

WHY did you do this to me? I saw the Part Two and figured I would go back and read part 1, and let me tell you, I am a ...

Oh I forgot! I loved the prologue poem.

Whoa. That story hit me like a ton of bricks. Amazing, amazing emotion. A few things though, and I'm sorry for being nitpicky! The sky was amazing crystal, clear blue ...

Hey there! Good poem, the title caught my eye right off the bat. It's delightfully metaphorical. I agree with stargazer9927 about it feeling like a "teenager poem" but that's not ...

Wow, thanks so much for all the positive feedback! It warmed my heart, really. You're right about the ending, the fact that she's building a lighthouse should be clearer. Gonna ...

Hello Hero! Great job, this was a haunting and beautifully written poem. I absolutely loved the first two stanzas, especially the description of the giant, and how it is only ...

First off, I loved the first line Sorry out of politeness. I have a question, though, are you apologising to just the one person, or is each stanza a different ...

This story is sort of dream-like, not meant to be realistic. Also, I tried for the first time writing a story in the second person. Let me know what you ...

Hahaha, this is hilarious. So simple, so fresh and funny. I haven't read "Roberto" but now I definitely will. Just a couple things first, "steel" is misspelled in line 3, ...

Wow. The emotion displayed in this piece really tore me up. That being said, I think you have a great piece here. Ironically, it does have a few minor mistakes. ...

I really liked the story of this poem, and the lesson at the end is just beautifully worded. However, and I don't mean this to sound too harsh, I think ...

I loved this! Honestly, I didn't expect to because I'm not a fan of animals-speaking-as-humans, but this was so simple and heartfelt and genuine. It was never strained or strange. ...